Second Draft- Audience Feedback

So after playing the second draft to a different group of people, the generallity of the feedback was better. There were still a few bits that needed sorting out.

Things that people commented on included:

Make the logo spin,

The second verse looks a bit dull in colour and shots could be cut down further,

The first verse looks good and matches the music,

Some of the vocals are out of time with the video,

The second chorus should be more based on performance not mixing work,

Colours of live footage could be stronger,

One comment stated that in the second breakdown part, the cutting of the clips should match the beat, and use more live/whole band footage in this part.

Now we must take these points in and churn them out into quality video making. As you can see, we have plenty to work on!