Audience Feedback On First Draft

After showing our first draft to around ten people, the main feedback was that most liked the slow motion shots. A teacher mentioned that those type of shots are conventional of rock videos and maybe more should be used. In reaction to this, I think we could perhaps use the same shot as before, (obviously cut it at a different point) and just change the colours. This could be effective and create a psychadellic feel.

Another point mentioned was that the shots linked with the drum fills didn't quite work (the second in the first chorus, not the remix bit!) and each clip was too short. What I plan to do here is to half the clips to give the audience more of a chance to see what is in the shot, but still keep a similar effect.

Some clips were also not infact letterboxed yet which will most certainly be done!

A few people said that a few clips lasted too long and that it could be a lot more exciting if a couple of different things were done here and there. I think that looking at this, I will experiment over the coming weeks with different shots and maybe use close ups of people twice from different angles one after the other, but we will see.

This was all the feedback we got this time round. I think we just need to be a bit more imaginative.